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语文老师眼中的好作文有什么特点? |
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At that time, would you still remember me?
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田一禾
故垒西边人道是, 三国周郎赤壁
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大江东去浪涛尽,千古风流人物。
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童童妈
谢谢李老师的正版说明,就像李老师说的,上述特点只是表像,只有感受和思考,才能触发和创作出好作文。
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