楼主: 李海军老师
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注意,鸡蛋要撞地球了(终稿)! |
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盛鑫悦
嗯,好的,你这句话包含了作者对万千大众的不满与愤怒,同时也在谴责这个社会的不良风态
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无论干嘛,要保持开心
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God is God, but you are not God, you are only a man, do not go to the Lord, you will be defiled the Holy race!
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威猛先生全新四合一洗面奶,
除烷垢,除菌,除异味,外加柠檬香,四效合一! 威猛先生也用威猛先生! |
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李海军老师
分段。
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No matter how poor, learning is also want to keep a good mood.
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Sorry my friend!
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李海军老师
文章整体很幽默。
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李海军老师
情感生硬,平淡。
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